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While I'm a fan of many varieties of vore, I've been focusing on m/f scenarios on account of their rarity compared to other gender match-ups. With this story, I attempted to take what I'd learned about m/f vore and put it into practice.
The story tracks the brief course of a classic instance of "boy meets girl" in an analogous world where a capacity for vore is commonplace yet socially disdained.
It is approximately 5500 words long, but it contains detailed vore throughout.
There also are some sexual themes that tread into uncomfortable territories such as unwilling dominance and sexual abuse. I generally prefer implied sexual undertones rather than noisy sexual overtones in order to dodge tricky subjects, but I figured that as long as I'm writing stories about grizzly murder-for-pleasure, a little molestation here and there wouldn't hurt.
If you particularly dislike or enjoy certain aspects of the story, please tell me in the comments so I know what to avoid and what to pay attention to.
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Posted by ebedk 10 years ago Report
Excellent 'cruelty talk' as always. I love the dominance/sub - like qualities of vore and you really nail it. The false hopes were awesome too (when he stopped and went feet-first instead, and when she thought she had a real chance of getting out. Adds to the peril and humiliation (it was only midway through the paragraph that I realized what was REALLY happening). Good job and thank you for writing as always, especially this rare variety.
Posted by Grick 10 years ago Report
I'm happy you liked it. It's good to see people enjoying the more sadistic aspects of vore.
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
This is a very nicely written story. I really enjoyed reading it.
Posted by Grick 10 years ago Report
I'm glad you think so.
Posted by Predman101 10 years ago Report
Holy fuck, absolutely LOVE the ending!!!! Great characters!
Posted by Grick 10 years ago Report
Always pleasant to see more people enjoying abject sadism.
Posted by BardicLasher 10 years ago Report
Great story overall. My only complaint is that you named one of the characters Richard Grayson, and whether intentionally or not, the presence of that name served as a distraction. But yeah, great story, well written, love the ideas.
Posted by Grick 10 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it. Good catch on the name, by the way; it was entirely unintentional. It was meant to be a silly reflection of my account name (Rick, G.=Grick). That it matches a known author is an unhappy accident that should have been avoided.
Posted by BardicLasher 10 years ago Report
Known author? Dude, I'm talking about Robin the Boy Wonder. I'm one of /those/ nerds.
Posted by Grick 10 years ago Report
Hah! Dork! Really, though, that made me laugh. I inadvertently gave Robin's name to one of the least Robin-like characters I've seen. If you catch me making a nihilistic Clark Kent or a suave Peter Parker, please tell me and I'll get myself checked for some novel mental syndrome.
Posted by animatedfantasy 10 years ago Report
Nice story! Not sure you meant Dick Grayson from comics (which is funny if true.) but was interesting. I'd be interested in seeing his take of solving a human resources issue... Basically see if he'd be able to handle more than one XD